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William Goldman: Adventures in the Screen Trade

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After reading SAVE THE CAT by Blake Snyder I'm so conscious of despicable protagonists that i'm ready to throw something if a movie's lead doesn't make me love them in the first 15 minutes. I'm constantly making mental notes on the exact event, exchange, gesture, or whatever it is that emotionally entangles me with the hero.

Sure, Leonotis from 300 is a pretty stereotypical bad ass, but not every king takes the time to ask his wife's opinion before he takes his entire nation to war. That's the kind of thing a gentleman does regardless of his status as a veritable killing machine.

It's a sharp contrast from Zooey in WINTER PASSING who is drowning kittens by page 20. Sucking up to the audience is not going to save your troubled script but please, save the dolphin murder for National Geographic.

Excerpt: William Goldman's Adventures in the Screen Trade.

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chapter four

Harper

Harper, my next screenplay, was when I first began to learn at least a little about the craft of screenwriting.

It was also, inadvertently, when I began to learn about how movies actually happen. Boys and Girls Together had been published, to calamitous notices. (The New York Times said "a child of nine could understand this book before he could lift it." From there, the review got really bad.) However, a producer, Elliott Kastner, had optioned it for films.

I met with Kastner to talk about the book - I was not to be the screenwriter, which was plenty okay with me - but before we got into discussing any notions about how to turn a six-hundred-plus-page book into a one-hundred-twenty-page script, he began talking about a movie he'd recently seen, a very successful Western called The Professionals. "I'd like to do a movie like that," he said. "I'd like to do a movie with balls."

I suggested he read some of the Lew Archer detective books by Ross Macdonald, and if he liked them, I'd reread them and try and do a screenplay for him. He called the following Monday and said he was very much interested and that he would op-
tion whichever one I said.

There were probably ten Archer books published by this time, and like an idiot I started with the most recent and worked my way back. "Like an idiot" pertains to the fact that as the series went along, Macdonald was increasingly leaving the roots of the tough-guy Hammett-Chandler tradition where he began and was getting more interested in character complexity, less with plot.


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